After the seriousness of the last two days I though a little light-hearted verse was in order. I hope my actions have not scared too many of you away and you are still willing to participate, and like me - learn a thing or three.
What is a Limerick?
A Limerick is a five line poem that dates back to fourteenth century England. Limericks were short short, easily composed and often contained terms of a coarse and sexual nature. They were often recited by working classes and beggars in English pubs and taverns of the fifteenth, sixteenth and seventeenth centuries. As the poets that created limericks were viewed as drunks, Limericks were often view as rude and vulgar in nature.
The word ‘Limerick’ is thought to be named after an old Irish town of Limerick. It is believed that drunken pubs and taverns across England would sing out "Will you come up to Limerick?" where these ‘lewd‘ naughty songs were sung.
Limericks were sometimes used in nursery rhymes and other poems for children, such as this popular one:
Hickory Dickory Dock
The mouse ran up the clock
The clock struck one
The mouse ran down
Hickory Dickory Dock
How does one write a Limerick?
Simple, write a five-lined poem of varied length, in a manner that combines a triplet and a couplet . (A triplet is a three-line rhymed poem. A couplet a two-lined rhyming poem.) It is important to note that the rhythm is as important as the rhyme in this style of poetry.
Traditionally Limericks should be risque, without offending the majority of it's readers . This may prove a challenge for some bloggers but give it a bash(not literally that is), although literal devices are very much part of Limericks. As are puns, juxtapositions, idioms and figurative expressions. Most importantly, Limericks should be funny and contain a punchline , 'the heart of the joke'.
Some examples to help you put them together:
When limerick writers convene,
Their reason for making the scene,
Is to make tepid jokes,
Meant for church going folks,
Into verses perverse and obscene.
By Pierce Evans
And let me the canakin clink, clink;
And let me the canakin clink
A soldier's a man;
A life's but a span;
Why, then, let a soldier drink.
By Shakespeare from Othello (Act II Scene III)
There once was a fellow from Xiangling
Whose greatest delight was in mangling
Poems. He would drop
Words between lines and lop
Their ends off, and leave readers dang
By Elliott Moreton
Or this one, an alternate limerick edited version created by Shakespeare based on his famous Sonnet 116, “Let me not to the marriage of true minds” (one of my favourite favourites):
I once loved a lassie from Greenleigh
Whose comportment was naught short of queenly.
When she grows old and stout,
Wracked with chilblains and gout,
I'll embrace her no less, but more keenly
What is the Limerick format and rythym?
1. The limerick format is a A A B B A rhythym pattern.
2. Lines 1, 2 and 5 containing a three beat rhyme and have 7 to 10 syllables that rhyme with one another.
3. Lines 3 and 4 have a two beat rhyme and have a five to seven syllables which also rhyme with each other.
This is just a guide as you can see from the examples quotes. The example below tries to explain a limerick in the poem and illustrates the use of repeated lines:
There was a young poet quite fine,
Whose limericks repeated a line.
Though this was redundant,
Though this was redundant,
His limericks repeated a line.
By Carl Muckenhoupt
There was a young cannibal Ned,
Who used to eat onions in bed;
His mother said, "Sonny,
It's not very funny,
Why don't you eat people instead ?
By Gillian Nash
A newspaper poet for Hearst
Deprived of his reason
By uncontrolled sneezing
Was by phantasmal demons coerced
To write all of his limericks reversed.
By Elliott Moreton
About the only way I could get this right was to tap or clapping out the A A B B A rhythm as you compose. I suggest tapping on the desk as opposed to snapping your fingers - you co-workers look less strangly at you. It helps to think of funny situations, places, names and expressions. You will soon pick up the distinctive beat and rhyming pattern of all Limericks.
A flea and a fly in a flue
Were caught, so what could they do?
Said the fly, "Let us flee."
"Let us fly," said the flea.
So they flew through a flaw in the flue.
Anonymous
And finally, two examples written by Edward Lear:
There was a Young Lady of Portugal,
Whose ideas were excessively nautical:
She climbed up a tree,
To examine the sea,
But declared she would never leave Portugal.
There was an Old Man with a nose,
Who said, 'If you choose to suppose,
That my nose is too long,
You are certainly wrong!'
That remarkable Man with a nose.
Tuesday, November 27, 2007
Thursday, November 22, 2007
Confession
Ok, I can't take it anymore. The guilt is eating me alive like a gazillion fire ants on a man covered in honey. The stress!? Don't even get me started on the stress!
So here goes...
I HAVE NO FUCKING CLUE WHAT "IMFAO" means or "IMAO" for that matter.
Words cannot fully express how it pisses me off to read it. It pains me - no really it does. Seeing someone write "LOL" or something equally 24.com just fucking grates my nerves. Kinda like listening to my sex crazed cat screeching throughout the night or finger nails on a chalkboard. It fucking annoys me ok. My brain doesn't process abreviations - I dunno why. It just fucking doesn't.
So ja, not that I got that off my chest. What the fuck does it mean? Anyone?
Me? PMS? Never
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Comments:
November 22, 2007 - 15:38 — kachasu
flutterbye
here. just for you: http://home.versateladsl.be/bavertel/fun/swf_ani/monitor_cleaner.swf
November 22, 2007 - 15:46 — Flutter
KC
Can't open this site? What gives?
November 22, 2007 - 15:24 — Dolce
I hate 'em too, Fluts
fukkin' lots.
November 22, 2007 - 15:45 — Flutter
Ja D...
Worse still you meet this cool guy and he sms's in that weird text format.The attraction fades fast I tels yeh.
November 22, 2007 - 15:47 — Dolce
I was thinking Fluts
what if you and I date the same guy? We should chat!
November 22, 2007 - 15:50 — dex
errr
AGAIN?!
November 22, 2007 - 15:53 — Dolce
Something about
great minds and fools, Dex.
November 22, 2007 - 16:14 — Flutter
Erm...
And who would be the fool in this scenario?
ok it's me. I get it. sigh ...
November 22, 2007 - 15:12 — kachasu
*ahem*
can i ask if a secret ballot was held in which it was agreed that we would not swear?
this cutesie stuff is a bit, well, 24.
and if flutter posts one more fluffy bunny, i will fucking crack.
November 22, 2007 - 15:22 — Flutter
Confession 2
I love cute fluffy images. I find them soothing. I blame my parents - I was deprived of plushies as a child. My mother was a nurse and believed fur carried germs See it ain't my fault. We have already established that you were just about smothered with them as a child so we know where that comes from.
No sure where my psycosis with abreviations comes from, seeing as I can't spell for shite anyway.
* I will be saving those fluffy bunnies for just the right moment.... Bwhahahaa..
November 22, 2007 - 15:34 — kachasu
flutts - a disgrace to the blogging community
November 22, 2007 - 15:43 — Flutter
I'll use them sparingly OK
* evil grin *
November 22, 2007 - 15:50 — Dusty Muffin
Fluff for Flutts
Have you discovered lolcats?
I found it recently and have to confess that I keep going back.
*squirm*
November 22, 2007 - 16:08 — Flutter
Oh my Dusty...
I can't believe people comunicate that way. My brain is fried reading this...
" An Happy Thanksgiving to awl frum mee! Ai gotz to put the pyooter away fur a while cuz it’s nermally awn teh dining room tabul - and the time has come to set teh tabul with dishes n stuff!.
Teh turkey goes in teh oven in 3/4 hour - I’m nawt quite awn schdule - butt awl guests will at leest have a place to sit down!!
Hope all is going as well fur awl of yoo - and to awl r deer frenz whoo r thinking of us even though they don’t have this holiday - cheers to you and - oh deer - ai wish you awl cud bee heer.
We’re having turkey and ham and gravee and dressing and corn “stuff” and candied sweet potatoes and greeen been casserole and lima beens (mai personal favoriet) and two kinds of cole slaw and fresh cranberry relish and hot biscuits and mashed potatoes and apple pies and cream cheese pie (whipped cream fur the pies). Ai think that’s about it.
OMG - almoast forgot teh moast important thing. Mai funneh sister Pyzi is bringing a “Ritz salad” as well. You know, teh wun from Fawlty Towers when the guest wanted a Waldorf salad and Basil improvised?
Just have a few moar things to “whisk out of site” - and then ai will indeed bee verree thankful indeed!!
Love to you allJanet "
November 22, 2007 - 15:31 — Arbchick
Um Fluts...dammit
and we were getting on so well, I thought!
November 22, 2007 - 15:44 — Flutter
Arbie
You have too extremely cute little girls - come on! You're telling me you don't like cute things. I'm not fooled but teh gothy raven hair. Its just a disguise!
November 22, 2007 - 15:10 — Dusty Muffin
Flutts
Here's a website which lists all of them. Some of them are very funny, but there's no way I'm going to waste time learning them, because @TEOTD IDC, and IHA.
kthxbai.
November 22, 2007 - 15:59 — Flutter
Thanks Dust
Very enlightening. Some of those are just bloody weird. What kind of conversation would you be having if you said:
GSYJDWURMNKH: Good Seeing You, Just Don't Wear Your Monkey
HatIANNNGC: I Am Not Nurturing the Next Generation of Casualties
NIFOC: Nude In Front Of The Computer
BTFO: Bend The F*** Over
BOCTAAE: But Of Course There Are Always Exceptions
BSBD&NE: Book Smart, Brain Dead & No Experience
BTWITIAILW/U : By The Way I Think I Am In Love With You
November 22, 2007 - 16:00 — dex
HAHA! Fluts -
I like BTFO.
BTFO!
November 22, 2007 - 16:21 — Flutter
DEX - YS
RUMCYMHMD?STPPYNOZGTW!
LYKYAMY
F
November 22, 2007 - 14:48 — morticia
lmfao!
laugh my fecking ass off... or just plain old lmao without the fecks, see?
rofl - roll on floor laughing
dont know the rest - not a hip mixit chick.
November 22, 2007 - 14:52 — Flutter
Mixit?
That silly cellphone craze thing.Bloody hell. A teacher friend of mine compaines that his students write english essays and answer exam papers is sms or mixit text. What is our world coming to?
We gotta set an example people!
November 22, 2007 - 14:54 — morticia
sorry. cant let the lmao go!
i dont do the other shitty text chops, but i like this one!
November 22, 2007 - 14:47 — Arbchick
I don't know either Fluts...
but don't give a toss, really!
November 22, 2007 - 14:48 — dex
LMAO
@ Fluts + Arb
November 22, 2007 - 14:55 — Flutter
FU2
Dex LMAO @ FLUTS + ARB = LMFAO@DEX
November 22, 2007 - 14:59 — Arbchick
Um five words (whole ones) Fluts
painkillers and hot water bottle
November 22, 2007 - 15:04 — Flutter
Thanks Arb
Tried that. Painkillers make me sleepy and have a deadline! When it rains it pours.
November 22, 2007 - 15:01 — dex
Yeah Fluts
leave the broom by the door and take a nice relaxing ride on you menstrual cycle.
November 22, 2007 - 15:07 — Flutter
Dexasterous
Ur so funeee.
I mean that you're a funny blogger.Funny strange not funny hahah.
November 22, 2007 - 15:03 — Arbchick
Dexipoo....you're gonna get hurt
DUCK...DUCK NOW! Sheeeet dude - you're either VERY BRAVE or VERY STUPID!!! Man - the reply to this one should be special.
November 22, 2007 - 14:49 — Arbchick
OK Laugh My Ass Off
Dexipoo...you give it away so easily!
Sunday, November 18, 2007
There’s a demon in my review
So I have been doing a bit of a purge. An internal cleansing. A emotional detox. A mind vacumn. Ok that last one is a bit ambiguous. It’s a vacumn so there ain’t nutting to clean. My heart on the other hand has been coagulated with toxic people. Constricting my soul. Bending my already warped (and fragile) playing field.
I went to see a hynotherapist. Terribly interesting woman. A very serious don’t-fuck-with me disposition but soft sparkly green-grey eyes and spikey dark brown hair that’s straight out of a manga cartoon. She had a firm, soothing voice and spent a very long time explaining her thinking, how this worked, how it would benefit me and if I was ok with it all. I took it all in, trying desperatey to hide my nervousness, knowing full well that I wasn’t fooling her for one teensy little nanosecond.
We chatted for what seemed like hours until finally, after 90mins she told me she was leaving the room for 5 mins. I was to empty my bladder, get myself comfortable and take some long deep breaths. I tried, really I did, but succeeded only to reduce myself into a mild hyperventilative state.
She comes back and sits very close to me. A little too close, and rests her hand on my shoulder squeezing gently. I inhaled her herby aromatherapy scent and without a single word uttered from her, drifted into an incredibly relaxed state. It was all very surreal. The room grew very silent and all I wanted to do was shut my eyes and sink into slumber. As if sensing this she squeezed my shoulder and waved her hand infront of my face, keeping me focused. And so it began.
It started three months ago when I began having difficulty sleeping. Then the nightmares started again and very, very old festering wounds came bubbling to the surface once more. I had to go digging in them, again, to get them to heal. It is an ongoing process for me, this one of forgetting. Well maybe forgetting isn't exactly it - that would be impossible. More like letting it receed into the background. Where I know its there and I can draw from it’s darkness, only this time - strength instead of sadness and courage instead of fear.
I wonder sometime about our ability to sabotage our own lives on a subconsciece level. I wish I knew where the flick switch was so I could stop doing it. Wish I could cover it with 9 inches of concrete and never go there again. Never have to go there again. Why do I go there, again ?
So three and a half hours later I felt cleaner, free-er, healthier. Whole again. A lighter, a little brighter, like I had exorcised a few demons. Well, until next time that is. It never quite goes away, it just fades into the background. But only if I let it.
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Comments:
November 19, 2007 - 11:03 — Dolce
Fluts
I've often wondered if I could go under; got a pretty tight stranglehold on consciousness (read: control). But this has made me think...
November 19, 2007 - 08:24 — morticia
also want to flutts
but i want a regressive hypnotherapist - want to go waaay back - so will probably have to look at esoteric practitioners?
November 19, 2007 - 10:32 — Flutter
Hi Mort
The regressive stuff can be overwhelming. I didn't do the past lives thing but maybe one day. You will be surprised how many non-esoteric practictioners there are that do that stuff. Its not for everyone and one has to be braced.
November 19, 2007 - 10:58 — morticia
i've had some insight
but not in depth... from the esoterics - and it made a lot of sense - to me. i'm more afraid of spending the rest of my days not understanding the aspects of my soul that have no foundation is this life.
November 19, 2007 - 11:01 — Flutter
Morty
For the most part I feel the same - curiosty is a dangerous thing though. I just wonder how it all fits in. What lessons I have learnt in previous lives that I had skipped and how that come to unfold in this one. Context stuff but ja, most of us have enough work trying to figure our this lifetime.
November 19, 2007 - 09:04 — Arbchick
No Morts...more like
an EXCORCIST!! Sorry honey - couldn't resist...just yanking your braid!
November 19, 2007 - 09:06 — morticia
cheaper alternative?
a mean arsed biker in an obscure town, a carton of smokes and a bottle of rotgut - thats my kind of exorcise!
November 19, 2007 - 09:08 — Arbchick
Morts
there is no hope *sigh*
Oh, and thank God for that!
November 19, 2007 - 09:12 — morticia
good boys dont want me
well, except d - and i like people who have confronted bigger beasts than me. not into psychologists - i pay them to hear my self analysis - pointless.
again - the stain'd song we spoke of - maybe i seek what i see within myself - looking for home arb...
November 19, 2007 - 08:13 — Dusty Muffin
Fluts
Good on yer for confronting it. Your strength and resolve are a very good foundation. Hang in there!
November 19, 2007 - 10:33 — Flutter
Thanks Dust..
Its been a long hard road but I am getting there.
November 18, 2007 - 19:03 — Arbchick
Good for you fluts
and no they NEVER go away...those bad things, but if you're lucky, you will find ways of coping...looks like you have sweetness....good girl.
November 19, 2007 - 10:34 — Flutter
Arbie...
The biggest realisation I have made is accepting that these things never go away. Once you have mad that mind shift - everything fall into place a bit better and one finds alot of peace I find.
November 19, 2007 - 10:38 — Arbchick
True Flutter
But unfortunately, we don't live in a vacuum...influences in our lives sometimes awaken the dead. Anyway, this stuff - for another time, me thinks.
November 18, 2007 - 16:52 — kachasu
demons
hey flutts. that is brave of you. the way my demon-seeking has worked so far is that the longer i stay sober (nearly five years now) the more I find. i am grateful for that. because, if i had forced some of the memories, i may not have been able to cope with what came out of pandora's box. it seems that as long as i do what i can as far as working my steps, praying and meditating, the god of my own understanding gives me these things when i am strong enough to not feel agony.
after all, alcoholism is a symptom of something big black and ugly.
i have found that the inner saboteur me has slipped into the background and i recognise it when it shows its ugly little face. good luck. i thought about doing the hypnotherapy, but i am really glad i didn't. some of the things i have seen in myself and remembered would have shattered me into a million pieces if i were unprepared.
Novembents r 19, 2007 - 10:40 — Flutter
KC...
Our inner saboteurs are quite something aren't they? Self destructive little time bombs waiting to go off.
Hynotherapy is not for everyone. I tried it 7 years ago - unprepared and was completely beside myself. There is an interesting technique now that let people process things without remembering anything about the sessions until your therapist feels your (sub)/conscious mind can handle it. I was asked if I wanted the option but felt a bit nervous. You really have to really trust your therapist and be sure that they know what they are doing. I looked for the right person for a long time before deciding on her.
November 18, 2007 - 15:57 — dex
hey Flutsey
damned scary thing, i reckon - opening the door so someone can get inside your mind. You brave blogger.
glad to hear that it's helping.
November 19, 2007 - 10:42 — Flutter
Quiet daunting Dexie...
But oddly liberating. Sometimes in letting people see who you really are - the apparent shame of things is lost and you see that you are not this sad damaged person but just another person, struggling through issues. That you are really ok. Took me a while to figure that out.
November 18, 2007 - 14:23 — bluepete
frightened
hey flutter, I read this helpful quote yesterday. Bion says, "In every consulting room there ought to be two rather frightened people: the patient and the therapist. If they are not, one wonders why they are bothering to find out what everyone knows".
I think it's good to be a bit anxious, especially when you're facing some of the demons from the past. But, as you say, exorcising them a bit at a time is the only way.That's sort of what I was saying in my blog yesterday. We quiet the mind (through hypnotherapy, sleep, yoga whatever) and often quite scary stuff comes out. Then the challenge is either to run away from it or try to deal with it the best we can. Good luck, sister.
November 18, 2007 - 15:02 — Flutter
Hey BP
Thanks. Fortunately I am at the stage where I am not fighting it any more. Just desperate to get better - move on. Just sometimes I forget and slip back in that scary pit. It was an interesting experience I must say and the effects are incredible and quite instant - which is a little scary.
November 18, 2007 - 18:09 — nossie
Fluts
You be a brave, brave blogger...but they say one has to face those demons to conquer them...scary shit...but you've taken that first step so just keep going. Respect.
November 19, 2007 - 10:52 — Flutter
Thanks Nos...
You are quite a brave person yourself. A brave blogger too. Much respect.
I went to see a hynotherapist. Terribly interesting woman. A very serious don’t-fuck-with me disposition but soft sparkly green-grey eyes and spikey dark brown hair that’s straight out of a manga cartoon. She had a firm, soothing voice and spent a very long time explaining her thinking, how this worked, how it would benefit me and if I was ok with it all. I took it all in, trying desperatey to hide my nervousness, knowing full well that I wasn’t fooling her for one teensy little nanosecond.
We chatted for what seemed like hours until finally, after 90mins she told me she was leaving the room for 5 mins. I was to empty my bladder, get myself comfortable and take some long deep breaths. I tried, really I did, but succeeded only to reduce myself into a mild hyperventilative state.
She comes back and sits very close to me. A little too close, and rests her hand on my shoulder squeezing gently. I inhaled her herby aromatherapy scent and without a single word uttered from her, drifted into an incredibly relaxed state. It was all very surreal. The room grew very silent and all I wanted to do was shut my eyes and sink into slumber. As if sensing this she squeezed my shoulder and waved her hand infront of my face, keeping me focused. And so it began.
It started three months ago when I began having difficulty sleeping. Then the nightmares started again and very, very old festering wounds came bubbling to the surface once more. I had to go digging in them, again, to get them to heal. It is an ongoing process for me, this one of forgetting. Well maybe forgetting isn't exactly it - that would be impossible. More like letting it receed into the background. Where I know its there and I can draw from it’s darkness, only this time - strength instead of sadness and courage instead of fear.
I wonder sometime about our ability to sabotage our own lives on a subconsciece level. I wish I knew where the flick switch was so I could stop doing it. Wish I could cover it with 9 inches of concrete and never go there again. Never have to go there again. Why do I go there, again ?
So three and a half hours later I felt cleaner, free-er, healthier. Whole again. A lighter, a little brighter, like I had exorcised a few demons. Well, until next time that is. It never quite goes away, it just fades into the background. But only if I let it.
_____________________________________________________
Comments:
November 19, 2007 - 11:03 — Dolce
Fluts
I've often wondered if I could go under; got a pretty tight stranglehold on consciousness (read: control). But this has made me think...
November 19, 2007 - 08:24 — morticia
also want to flutts
but i want a regressive hypnotherapist - want to go waaay back - so will probably have to look at esoteric practitioners?
November 19, 2007 - 10:32 — Flutter
Hi Mort
The regressive stuff can be overwhelming. I didn't do the past lives thing but maybe one day. You will be surprised how many non-esoteric practictioners there are that do that stuff. Its not for everyone and one has to be braced.
November 19, 2007 - 10:58 — morticia
i've had some insight
but not in depth... from the esoterics - and it made a lot of sense - to me. i'm more afraid of spending the rest of my days not understanding the aspects of my soul that have no foundation is this life.
November 19, 2007 - 11:01 — Flutter
Morty
For the most part I feel the same - curiosty is a dangerous thing though. I just wonder how it all fits in. What lessons I have learnt in previous lives that I had skipped and how that come to unfold in this one. Context stuff but ja, most of us have enough work trying to figure our this lifetime.
November 19, 2007 - 09:04 — Arbchick
No Morts...more like
an EXCORCIST!! Sorry honey - couldn't resist...just yanking your braid!
November 19, 2007 - 09:06 — morticia
cheaper alternative?
a mean arsed biker in an obscure town, a carton of smokes and a bottle of rotgut - thats my kind of exorcise!
November 19, 2007 - 09:08 — Arbchick
Morts
there is no hope *sigh*
Oh, and thank God for that!
November 19, 2007 - 09:12 — morticia
good boys dont want me
well, except d - and i like people who have confronted bigger beasts than me. not into psychologists - i pay them to hear my self analysis - pointless.
again - the stain'd song we spoke of - maybe i seek what i see within myself - looking for home arb...
November 19, 2007 - 08:13 — Dusty Muffin
Fluts
Good on yer for confronting it. Your strength and resolve are a very good foundation. Hang in there!
November 19, 2007 - 10:33 — Flutter
Thanks Dust..
Its been a long hard road but I am getting there.
November 18, 2007 - 19:03 — Arbchick
Good for you fluts
and no they NEVER go away...those bad things, but if you're lucky, you will find ways of coping...looks like you have sweetness....good girl.
November 19, 2007 - 10:34 — Flutter
Arbie...
The biggest realisation I have made is accepting that these things never go away. Once you have mad that mind shift - everything fall into place a bit better and one finds alot of peace I find.
November 19, 2007 - 10:38 — Arbchick
True Flutter
But unfortunately, we don't live in a vacuum...influences in our lives sometimes awaken the dead. Anyway, this stuff - for another time, me thinks.
November 18, 2007 - 16:52 — kachasu
demons
hey flutts. that is brave of you. the way my demon-seeking has worked so far is that the longer i stay sober (nearly five years now) the more I find. i am grateful for that. because, if i had forced some of the memories, i may not have been able to cope with what came out of pandora's box. it seems that as long as i do what i can as far as working my steps, praying and meditating, the god of my own understanding gives me these things when i am strong enough to not feel agony.
after all, alcoholism is a symptom of something big black and ugly.
i have found that the inner saboteur me has slipped into the background and i recognise it when it shows its ugly little face. good luck. i thought about doing the hypnotherapy, but i am really glad i didn't. some of the things i have seen in myself and remembered would have shattered me into a million pieces if i were unprepared.
Novembents r 19, 2007 - 10:40 — Flutter
KC...
Our inner saboteurs are quite something aren't they? Self destructive little time bombs waiting to go off.
Hynotherapy is not for everyone. I tried it 7 years ago - unprepared and was completely beside myself. There is an interesting technique now that let people process things without remembering anything about the sessions until your therapist feels your (sub)/conscious mind can handle it. I was asked if I wanted the option but felt a bit nervous. You really have to really trust your therapist and be sure that they know what they are doing. I looked for the right person for a long time before deciding on her.
November 18, 2007 - 15:57 — dex
hey Flutsey
damned scary thing, i reckon - opening the door so someone can get inside your mind. You brave blogger.
glad to hear that it's helping.
November 19, 2007 - 10:42 — Flutter
Quiet daunting Dexie...
But oddly liberating. Sometimes in letting people see who you really are - the apparent shame of things is lost and you see that you are not this sad damaged person but just another person, struggling through issues. That you are really ok. Took me a while to figure that out.
November 18, 2007 - 14:23 — bluepete
frightened
hey flutter, I read this helpful quote yesterday. Bion says, "In every consulting room there ought to be two rather frightened people: the patient and the therapist. If they are not, one wonders why they are bothering to find out what everyone knows".
I think it's good to be a bit anxious, especially when you're facing some of the demons from the past. But, as you say, exorcising them a bit at a time is the only way.That's sort of what I was saying in my blog yesterday. We quiet the mind (through hypnotherapy, sleep, yoga whatever) and often quite scary stuff comes out. Then the challenge is either to run away from it or try to deal with it the best we can. Good luck, sister.
November 18, 2007 - 15:02 — Flutter
Hey BP
Thanks. Fortunately I am at the stage where I am not fighting it any more. Just desperate to get better - move on. Just sometimes I forget and slip back in that scary pit. It was an interesting experience I must say and the effects are incredible and quite instant - which is a little scary.
November 18, 2007 - 18:09 — nossie
Fluts
You be a brave, brave blogger...but they say one has to face those demons to conquer them...scary shit...but you've taken that first step so just keep going. Respect.
November 19, 2007 - 10:52 — Flutter
Thanks Nos...
You are quite a brave person yourself. A brave blogger too. Much respect.
Thursday, November 15, 2007
GREETINGS BLOGGERS AND WELCOME TO HAIKU FRIDAY!
Some of you are groaning. Please stop that!
This is supposed to be fun and you may even learn a thing or three. Let me be clear from the outset. I am no expert. Part of the reason I am doing this is to learn. I have borrowed bits and pieces of this from various places and Haiku boffins out there, please don’t bite my head off! I have tried to make this as simple as possible to encourage people to participate. All you have to do is follow Points 1 to 4 below.
Point 1: “What do you have we have to do?” Simple, make all you comments on the blog today in ‘haiku’ format. * Bloggers failing to comply will have all their blogs and comments posted in shocking pink. I hear. gulp. *
Point 2: “What is a ‘haiku’?” Haiku is an ancient style of Japanese poetry. It is often moving and inspirational and has the ability to capture a period in time, a moment, places and feelings into just a few words. For me personally, the beauty of Haiku lies in the succint way one can express oneself poetrywise. They say 'less is more'.
Point 3: “How does one ‘haiku’?” Much like good sex, a haiku has four essential elements:
1. a rhythm2. it encapsulates a moment3. it embodies a spirit4. it involves a ‘thing’ of some sort
Just think: rhythm, moment, spirit, thing. Haiku masters will also embody the following elements for a sure winner.
- maintaining the haiku ‘spirit’
- a sense of 'presence' (context, a season etc)
- success with juxtaposing images- appropriateness of the subject matter
- poetic taste
- poets sense of proportion in choosing the right form
Point 4: "What is the haiku format?"
The oldest and more complex form of traditional Japanese haiku is called Tanka and dates back to the 12th century. Traditionally haiku's have an odd number of syllables - usually up to 31 syllables. You can see some examples of 31 syllable Tanka at the bottom of the page.
The simplest and most popular form of Haiku though, is made of 17 syllables, which was traditionally written as a single sentence in a single line. A more formal and modern interpretation is the 5-7-5 rhythm three line format. This is just a guide as can be seen in the examples of haiku below.
It is important to note about Haiku poems usually have two images although some can have a single image such as this one:
Eg. Typical single-image Haiku formats.
like gold beaten to it’s utmost thinness
(Basho – a Japanese Haiku master - translated)
Others follow the more traditional two-image format. The second image is usually divided by a 'cutting word' or punctuation which can be seen in some of these:
Eg. Typical two-image, 17 syllable haiku formats. Note the use of the 5-7-5 syllable rhythm in some of them. Also note that this rhythm format is flexible and pick up on the moment, spirit and 'things'.
Still unopened
The greenish hydrangea flowers:
The taste of tea (Cicely Hill)
At last I am leaving:
in rainless skies, a cool moon…
pure is my heart
(Senseki - translated)
Farewell…
I pass as all things do
dew on the grass.
(Banzan - translated)
On a journey, ill:
my dream goes wandering
over withered fields.
(Basho)
Since time began
the dead alone know peace.
Life is but melting snow.
(Nandai - translated)
Eg. Up to 31 syllable Tanka formats.
Trailing on the wind,
The smoke from Mount Fuji
Melts into the sky.
So too my thoughts –
Unknown their resting-place.
(Priest Saigyo – translated)
Sixty-six times
have these eyes beheld the
changing scene of autumn.
I have said enough about moonlight,
Ask no more.
Only listen to the voice of pines
and cedarswhen no wind stirs.
(Ryonen - translated)
See! It's really easy. It is a challenge but try your best and there is no such thing as silly haiku.
________________________________________
Comments:
November 17, 2007 - 17:12 — Valhalla
I got it all wrong!
Counted words instead of syllables!! Ah sighs. Welcome to the jungle of underachievement, Slash said. My humble apologies. But it was great, thanks Flutts & Dex. (don't trust the bastard though but my heart still has a place for him.)
November 16, 2007 - 17:45 — Flutter
The end draws near...
I think Haiku Friday was a smash. Hats off to Val, Ramon, Gary, Dolce and Echoes who are particularly gifted in the art of Haiku and special kudos to everyone who gave it a bash. It was good fun!
Mort, glad you're feeling better and will hold you haiku-ing us when you're up to it.Cheers all. Lekker naweek... alcohol beckons...
November 17, 2007 - 16:45 — Ramon
Flutter
You are pretty damn good yourself. And it was an excellent day - one of the best! Next year again, Haiku organiser?
November 17, 2007 - 17:08 — Flutter
Thanks Ramon
I had great fun too and I learnt so much from the guru's - yourself included. I am looking forward to many more learning sessions. Will think about some more interesting Friday fun.
How are you?
November 17, 2007 - 17:18 — Ramon
Damn fine, Flutter
Life goes on and all that.Going to Bangkok on Thursday for some training course and will be staying with old Vaan. I'll see if I can score another shirt or two.
Flu gone, then?
November 17, 2007 - 18:00 — Flutter
Ramona
Last dregs hanging around but on the mend I think. Doesn't help that every other person has it too. My dad has been struck doen with a particularly bad strain - jeez.
Enjoy Bangkok!! Say hello to Vaan - handsome devil and have fun. Vaan's T-shirts are cool. I wore mine on Diwali :-)
November 17, 2007 - 07:24 — nossie
Fluts
and mine??? Pffffft.
November 17, 2007 - 16:36 — Flutter
And Nos!!
I am sorry. You were great too. I particularly like this one.
It's hard enough to
speak my mind tho' the words are there
my own silence deafens me.
It speaks to me as does your frangipani one - for reasons I cannot explain here.
November 17, 2007 - 20:30 — nossie
Flutter
The silence of the Lambs, hey?
November 17, 2007 - 20:43 — Flutter
Lambchops
Mmhhh... :-)
How are you and your doing? Better?
November 17, 2007 - 20:46 — nossie
With a hint of
mint...yeah, better now. Time heals most of what ails us...physically.
November 17, 2007 - 20:52 — Flutter
I can't do a roast lamb
or beef for that matter. It's always stringy or dry or just plain crap.
Glad to hear it and sadly the emotional stuff will take alot more time. Does she have a better retraining order? Is he in jail yet?
November 17, 2007 - 20:57 — nossie
Yep...
the bastard is where he belongs...in jail...awaiting trial...no bail...and he's a pretty boy....he WILL get his, I'm sure.
As for the roast lamb...mine is legendary.
Poke the leg full of garlic, butter and rosemary.Add 3 cups of water to roasting dish.Place (closed) dish/pot in oven overnight at 100 degrees C.
it will fall off the bone - garuenteed.
November 17, 2007 - 21:04 — Flutter
Overnight?
Never thought of that. Last year's xmas roast was a disaster and I am determined to get it right this year. Shame everyone was so polite. That sounds way to easy but will give it a bash! Any cool receipes for a beef pot roast. My Italian friend's mom did this legendary rosemary beef pot roast but sadly has died with the receipe and my friend is traipsing around Germany.
November 17, 2007 - 21:08 — nossie
Overnight!!
You cannot go wrong. Just warn everyone that the oven is on for a purpose...I've had hubbee turn it off late one night before a big family lunch only to discover naught had happened in the oven overnight....we had a braai instead. Roast beef...pretty much the same only add mustard seeds and red wine instead of water. Good luck!!
November 16, 2007 - 17:46 — dex
pffft.
well, i just didn't want to do it well, okay.
-- picks lip off floor and shuffles away.
November 16, 2007 - 17:53 — Flutter
Dexie
I suck worse than you,
wait! or is that, I suck better
than you? ag whatever!
November 16, 2007 - 11:23 — kachasu
Kayoda say
haiku is for those who live on msg
and have very smellytoes.
November 16, 2007 - 11:27 — Flutter
Amiflutter says
she who has smoke breath
should not cast first stone, for glasshouses,
I do not design
November 16, 2007 - 11:37 — kachasu
Kayoda says
queens should beware of fate
in store like her majesty marie antoinette
who cannot eat cake again...
because, amiflutter, her head
was lobbed off by an angry mob.
November 16, 2007 - 11:42 — Flutter
Amiflutter says
what's this angry mob
of which KaYoda speaks? I can
eat cake gluten free
November 16, 2007 - 11:47 — kachasu
Kayoda says
Mob of one, small jedi is.
Angry, quick, happy to smack stick
against haiku and poetry pricks.
November 16, 2007 - 12:05 — Flutter
AmiFlutter says
solitary jedi
dwarfed by smack? I fear
you have not enough whip!
bring your mob and pit
against haiku wit typhoon,
small windy bag you.
November 16, 2007 - 11:59 — Dolce
Small Jedi
Small Jedi indeed
dwergie on attack again
beware your ankles!
November 16, 2007 - 12:01 — kachasu
hahahaha
oh dolce...
you funny blogette.
November 16, 2007 - 10:47 — Echoes
Dum de dum
Writing her memoirs
The bemused flutter
reads her first haiku
November 16, 2007 - 10:53 — Flutter
Echoes...
I like the quiet
echoes of your words that resound long
after I have read them
November 16, 2007 - 11:03 — Echoes
Flutter
Words that taps your
imagination
Fluttering around
your conscious mind madly
Seeking recourse
in quiet contemplation
November 16, 2007 - 11:20 — Flutter
Too true Echoes
too madly these words
flutbutterflies only live so longbefore
exhaustion takes over
November 16, 2007 - 11:24 — Echoes
Flutter gods
Butterflies are
but winged gods
Briefly breathing sun
into our world Let them
flutter by reverentially
November 16, 2007 - 11:33 — Flutter
Echoes
I shall then, flutter
words across new and strange lands
bathing in my warm sun
November 16, 2007 - 11:38 — Echoes
Double flutter
Until snatched by flutterby hunters
You struggle briefly in green net
Pinned forever to white death
Your winged beauty echoes on
But for steel pins of death
Wonder for hunter and child
November 16, 2007 - 11:52 — Flutter
Echoes
your words speak great truths
green traps savage, await me
all I have to give I fear,
is wingless offerings, not enough
for this mothy gifted mass
November 16, 2007 - 11:59 — Echoes
Flutter Reborn
But renew you will
Escape from your netted hell imminent…
through death you will live
Them come back - bring sun
and summer, happy memories in fields
Of lavender and echoing dreams
November 16, 2007 - 12:18 — Flutter
If only you knew Echoes...
constantly renewed
everyday, this ghostly place
soars with smiles my soul
sunny fragrant dreams
happy tears carve new
paths a-cross, jaded hearts
November 16, 2007 - 12:32 — Echoes
And we stumble on Flutter
life - a vicious circle
drags us along, our jaded hearts
constantly broken and mended
as our cursed nature
requires yearning to love forever -
lust mere thieves of hearts
November 16, 2007 - 10:24 — Flutter
Adminguy
You need to chill bru
storm in teacups should not rile
you so. Deep breaths Dex!
November 16, 2007 - 10:32 — dex
Fluts
a knife in the dark
is sometimes justified as
a means to an end.
November 16, 2007 - 10:38 — nossie
Adminguy
You are a dark knight
with a caring warm heart buried deep
may you shine on eternally.
November 16, 2007 - 10:37 — Flutter
AG I think
silence strikes greater fear
than death cut by deft finger
strokes, or so I hear
November 16, 2007 - 10:42 — Flutter
ok...
your point speaks to me
like shit it fades into dus
tlet itches be scratched
November 16, 2007 - 10:37 — Dolce
Adminguy
Adminguy, did you just
do what I think you did?
Knight to Bishop 4
November 16, 2007 - 10:40 — nossie
Adminguy
64 block on the board
be you king or pawn black or white
history comes to us rejoicing.
November 16, 2007 - 10:45 — Arbchick
adminguy
another kindness
would be to delete all
signs of his existence
November 16, 2007 - 10:54 — Arbchick
Adminguy
thank you sexy thingyou are amazing you know we're very grateful
November 16, 2007 - 10:56 — adminguy
shhh
quiet, leetle cheeckin
let us not dwell on events
that never took place ;)
November 16, 2007 - 10:40 — adminguy
he looks to the sky whistles
he looks to the sky whistles a tune: whateverare they referring to?
November 16, 2007 - 08:46 — Valhalla
5-7-5
They speak in ancient tongues
cold honey leaks from the secret mouth
bees shiver in frozen flowers
November 16, 2007 - 10:15 — Dolce
Halla
Again, I'm humbled
by the beauty of your verse
Sensory art work
November 16, 2007 - 08:37 — dex
Another world 1st:
i can like to build
the first Benoni Haiku.roll your R's, mo-fo.
i am deep like Boksburg lake.
November 16, 2007 - 09:43 — Flutter
Deksel
kwatmeisterrr drrrreams of me?
like Boksburg lakes deep frrrreee wild
frrrreeee speech Flutterrrrrrrrr.......
November 16, 2007 - 08:41 — Dusty Muffin
Dex
Ag man Dex you knowYou make me fall off my chairI can like to laugh
November 16, 2007 - 10:17 — Dolce
Schmex
My rrrrs rolls perfectwhen I'm wearing a jean pantand a high heel shoe.
November 16, 2007 - 08:22 — kachasu
sounds like shit to me
so, i will hang out on my forums for haiku friday.
you lot are such poetry snobs.
*mutter*
November 16, 2007 - 11:13 — Flutter
KC
i see you watchingfrom fringes. Me thinks you have uch to offer this end
November 16, 2007 - 08:24 — dex
Ah.
i see it was a moooo-sli morning, Pixie.
November 16, 2007 - 08:26 — kachasu
i am groovy dex
just so long as i don't picked on for lack of haiku.
November 16, 2007 - 08:31 — dex
ag KC
who will pick on you?you've been spoken of the world over;mountains tremble in fear.
November 16, 2007 - 11:16 — Flutter
Dexie
tis true ja, KC strikes
fear into the most warring heart
cowering like lambs
November 16, 2007 - 08:38 — Dusty Muffin
KC - Haiku 101
You just write three lines with syllables in each, of three, five and then three.
You will need fingersto make sure you do it right.There! Done and dusted.
November 16, 2007 - 08:51 — kachasu
i don't care!
bloody haiku nazi flutter is.
November 16, 2007 - 09:37 — Flutter
Excellent KC...
single image haiku brilliant Thatch
November 16, 2007 - 08:46 — dex
dusty
its 5-7-5 isn't it?
November 16, 2007 - 09:34 — Dusty Muffin
Dex
you are a smartie
and today you win the prize.
What’s your wish, Master?
November 16, 2007 - 09:40 — dex
Dusts
simple man, I am
-feet in a cold, clean river
is all that i want.
November 16, 2007 - 10:12 — Flutter
Yeh...
Mmhh.. rainbow rivers
colour mundane days with
fresh splashes of light
November 15, 2007 - 22:05 — dex
err
not so very sure
i am, of whether i have
what is needed here.
November 15, 2007 - 22:23 — Flutter
...
why Dex, you haiku
winter croaks broken chainsaw
men have poor rythym
November 15, 2007 - 22:53 — Arbchick
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr DEX
just grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
This is supposed to be fun and you may even learn a thing or three. Let me be clear from the outset. I am no expert. Part of the reason I am doing this is to learn. I have borrowed bits and pieces of this from various places and Haiku boffins out there, please don’t bite my head off! I have tried to make this as simple as possible to encourage people to participate. All you have to do is follow Points 1 to 4 below.
Point 1: “What do you have we have to do?” Simple, make all you comments on the blog today in ‘haiku’ format. * Bloggers failing to comply will have all their blogs and comments posted in shocking pink. I hear. gulp. *
Point 2: “What is a ‘haiku’?” Haiku is an ancient style of Japanese poetry. It is often moving and inspirational and has the ability to capture a period in time, a moment, places and feelings into just a few words. For me personally, the beauty of Haiku lies in the succint way one can express oneself poetrywise. They say 'less is more'.
Point 3: “How does one ‘haiku’?” Much like good sex, a haiku has four essential elements:
1. a rhythm2. it encapsulates a moment3. it embodies a spirit4. it involves a ‘thing’ of some sort
Just think: rhythm, moment, spirit, thing. Haiku masters will also embody the following elements for a sure winner.
- maintaining the haiku ‘spirit’
- a sense of 'presence' (context, a season etc)
- success with juxtaposing images- appropriateness of the subject matter
- poetic taste
- poets sense of proportion in choosing the right form
Point 4: "What is the haiku format?"
The oldest and more complex form of traditional Japanese haiku is called Tanka and dates back to the 12th century. Traditionally haiku's have an odd number of syllables - usually up to 31 syllables. You can see some examples of 31 syllable Tanka at the bottom of the page.
The simplest and most popular form of Haiku though, is made of 17 syllables, which was traditionally written as a single sentence in a single line. A more formal and modern interpretation is the 5-7-5 rhythm three line format. This is just a guide as can be seen in the examples of haiku below.
It is important to note about Haiku poems usually have two images although some can have a single image such as this one:
Eg. Typical single-image Haiku formats.
like gold beaten to it’s utmost thinness
(Basho – a Japanese Haiku master - translated)
Others follow the more traditional two-image format. The second image is usually divided by a 'cutting word' or punctuation which can be seen in some of these:
Eg. Typical two-image, 17 syllable haiku formats. Note the use of the 5-7-5 syllable rhythm in some of them. Also note that this rhythm format is flexible and pick up on the moment, spirit and 'things'.
Still unopened
The greenish hydrangea flowers:
The taste of tea (Cicely Hill)
At last I am leaving:
in rainless skies, a cool moon…
pure is my heart
(Senseki - translated)
Farewell…
I pass as all things do
dew on the grass.
(Banzan - translated)
On a journey, ill:
my dream goes wandering
over withered fields.
(Basho)
Since time began
the dead alone know peace.
Life is but melting snow.
(Nandai - translated)
Eg. Up to 31 syllable Tanka formats.
Trailing on the wind,
The smoke from Mount Fuji
Melts into the sky.
So too my thoughts –
Unknown their resting-place.
(Priest Saigyo – translated)
Sixty-six times
have these eyes beheld the
changing scene of autumn.
I have said enough about moonlight,
Ask no more.
Only listen to the voice of pines
and cedarswhen no wind stirs.
(Ryonen - translated)
See! It's really easy. It is a challenge but try your best and there is no such thing as silly haiku.
________________________________________
Comments:
November 17, 2007 - 17:12 — Valhalla
I got it all wrong!
Counted words instead of syllables!! Ah sighs. Welcome to the jungle of underachievement, Slash said. My humble apologies. But it was great, thanks Flutts & Dex. (don't trust the bastard though but my heart still has a place for him.)
November 16, 2007 - 17:45 — Flutter
The end draws near...
I think Haiku Friday was a smash. Hats off to Val, Ramon, Gary, Dolce and Echoes who are particularly gifted in the art of Haiku and special kudos to everyone who gave it a bash. It was good fun!
Mort, glad you're feeling better and will hold you haiku-ing us when you're up to it.Cheers all. Lekker naweek... alcohol beckons...
November 17, 2007 - 16:45 — Ramon
Flutter
You are pretty damn good yourself. And it was an excellent day - one of the best! Next year again, Haiku organiser?
November 17, 2007 - 17:08 — Flutter
Thanks Ramon
I had great fun too and I learnt so much from the guru's - yourself included. I am looking forward to many more learning sessions. Will think about some more interesting Friday fun.
How are you?
November 17, 2007 - 17:18 — Ramon
Damn fine, Flutter
Life goes on and all that.Going to Bangkok on Thursday for some training course and will be staying with old Vaan. I'll see if I can score another shirt or two.
Flu gone, then?
November 17, 2007 - 18:00 — Flutter
Ramona
Last dregs hanging around but on the mend I think. Doesn't help that every other person has it too. My dad has been struck doen with a particularly bad strain - jeez.
Enjoy Bangkok!! Say hello to Vaan - handsome devil and have fun. Vaan's T-shirts are cool. I wore mine on Diwali :-)
November 17, 2007 - 07:24 — nossie
Fluts
and mine??? Pffffft.
November 17, 2007 - 16:36 — Flutter
And Nos!!
I am sorry. You were great too. I particularly like this one.
It's hard enough to
speak my mind tho' the words are there
my own silence deafens me.
It speaks to me as does your frangipani one - for reasons I cannot explain here.
November 17, 2007 - 20:30 — nossie
Flutter
The silence of the Lambs, hey?
November 17, 2007 - 20:43 — Flutter
Lambchops
Mmhhh... :-)
How are you and your doing? Better?
November 17, 2007 - 20:46 — nossie
With a hint of
mint...yeah, better now. Time heals most of what ails us...physically.
November 17, 2007 - 20:52 — Flutter
I can't do a roast lamb
or beef for that matter. It's always stringy or dry or just plain crap.
Glad to hear it and sadly the emotional stuff will take alot more time. Does she have a better retraining order? Is he in jail yet?
November 17, 2007 - 20:57 — nossie
Yep...
the bastard is where he belongs...in jail...awaiting trial...no bail...and he's a pretty boy....he WILL get his, I'm sure.
As for the roast lamb...mine is legendary.
Poke the leg full of garlic, butter and rosemary.Add 3 cups of water to roasting dish.Place (closed) dish/pot in oven overnight at 100 degrees C.
it will fall off the bone - garuenteed.
November 17, 2007 - 21:04 — Flutter
Overnight?
Never thought of that. Last year's xmas roast was a disaster and I am determined to get it right this year. Shame everyone was so polite. That sounds way to easy but will give it a bash! Any cool receipes for a beef pot roast. My Italian friend's mom did this legendary rosemary beef pot roast but sadly has died with the receipe and my friend is traipsing around Germany.
November 17, 2007 - 21:08 — nossie
Overnight!!
You cannot go wrong. Just warn everyone that the oven is on for a purpose...I've had hubbee turn it off late one night before a big family lunch only to discover naught had happened in the oven overnight....we had a braai instead. Roast beef...pretty much the same only add mustard seeds and red wine instead of water. Good luck!!
November 16, 2007 - 17:46 — dex
pffft.
well, i just didn't want to do it well, okay.
-- picks lip off floor and shuffles away.
November 16, 2007 - 17:53 — Flutter
Dexie
I suck worse than you,
wait! or is that, I suck better
than you? ag whatever!
November 16, 2007 - 11:23 — kachasu
Kayoda say
haiku is for those who live on msg
and have very smellytoes.
November 16, 2007 - 11:27 — Flutter
Amiflutter says
she who has smoke breath
should not cast first stone, for glasshouses,
I do not design
November 16, 2007 - 11:37 — kachasu
Kayoda says
queens should beware of fate
in store like her majesty marie antoinette
who cannot eat cake again...
because, amiflutter, her head
was lobbed off by an angry mob.
November 16, 2007 - 11:42 — Flutter
Amiflutter says
what's this angry mob
of which KaYoda speaks? I can
eat cake gluten free
November 16, 2007 - 11:47 — kachasu
Kayoda says
Mob of one, small jedi is.
Angry, quick, happy to smack stick
against haiku and poetry pricks.
November 16, 2007 - 12:05 — Flutter
AmiFlutter says
solitary jedi
dwarfed by smack? I fear
you have not enough whip!
bring your mob and pit
against haiku wit typhoon,
small windy bag you.
November 16, 2007 - 11:59 — Dolce
Small Jedi
Small Jedi indeed
dwergie on attack again
beware your ankles!
November 16, 2007 - 12:01 — kachasu
hahahaha
oh dolce...
you funny blogette.
November 16, 2007 - 10:47 — Echoes
Dum de dum
Writing her memoirs
The bemused flutter
reads her first haiku
November 16, 2007 - 10:53 — Flutter
Echoes...
I like the quiet
echoes of your words that resound long
after I have read them
November 16, 2007 - 11:03 — Echoes
Flutter
Words that taps your
imagination
Fluttering around
your conscious mind madly
Seeking recourse
in quiet contemplation
November 16, 2007 - 11:20 — Flutter
Too true Echoes
too madly these words
flutbutterflies only live so longbefore
exhaustion takes over
November 16, 2007 - 11:24 — Echoes
Flutter gods
Butterflies are
but winged gods
Briefly breathing sun
into our world Let them
flutter by reverentially
November 16, 2007 - 11:33 — Flutter
Echoes
I shall then, flutter
words across new and strange lands
bathing in my warm sun
November 16, 2007 - 11:38 — Echoes
Double flutter
Until snatched by flutterby hunters
You struggle briefly in green net
Pinned forever to white death
Your winged beauty echoes on
But for steel pins of death
Wonder for hunter and child
November 16, 2007 - 11:52 — Flutter
Echoes
your words speak great truths
green traps savage, await me
all I have to give I fear,
is wingless offerings, not enough
for this mothy gifted mass
November 16, 2007 - 11:59 — Echoes
Flutter Reborn
But renew you will
Escape from your netted hell imminent…
through death you will live
Them come back - bring sun
and summer, happy memories in fields
Of lavender and echoing dreams
November 16, 2007 - 12:18 — Flutter
If only you knew Echoes...
constantly renewed
everyday, this ghostly place
soars with smiles my soul
sunny fragrant dreams
happy tears carve new
paths a-cross, jaded hearts
November 16, 2007 - 12:32 — Echoes
And we stumble on Flutter
life - a vicious circle
drags us along, our jaded hearts
constantly broken and mended
as our cursed nature
requires yearning to love forever -
lust mere thieves of hearts
November 16, 2007 - 10:24 — Flutter
Adminguy
You need to chill bru
storm in teacups should not rile
you so. Deep breaths Dex!
November 16, 2007 - 10:32 — dex
Fluts
a knife in the dark
is sometimes justified as
a means to an end.
November 16, 2007 - 10:38 — nossie
Adminguy
You are a dark knight
with a caring warm heart buried deep
may you shine on eternally.
November 16, 2007 - 10:37 — Flutter
AG I think
silence strikes greater fear
than death cut by deft finger
strokes, or so I hear
November 16, 2007 - 10:42 — Flutter
ok...
your point speaks to me
like shit it fades into dus
tlet itches be scratched
November 16, 2007 - 10:37 — Dolce
Adminguy
Adminguy, did you just
do what I think you did?
Knight to Bishop 4
November 16, 2007 - 10:40 — nossie
Adminguy
64 block on the board
be you king or pawn black or white
history comes to us rejoicing.
November 16, 2007 - 10:45 — Arbchick
adminguy
another kindness
would be to delete all
signs of his existence
November 16, 2007 - 10:54 — Arbchick
Adminguy
thank you sexy thingyou are amazing you know we're very grateful
November 16, 2007 - 10:56 — adminguy
shhh
quiet, leetle cheeckin
let us not dwell on events
that never took place ;)
November 16, 2007 - 10:40 — adminguy
he looks to the sky whistles
he looks to the sky whistles a tune: whateverare they referring to?
November 16, 2007 - 08:46 — Valhalla
5-7-5
They speak in ancient tongues
cold honey leaks from the secret mouth
bees shiver in frozen flowers
November 16, 2007 - 10:15 — Dolce
Halla
Again, I'm humbled
by the beauty of your verse
Sensory art work
November 16, 2007 - 08:37 — dex
Another world 1st:
i can like to build
the first Benoni Haiku.roll your R's, mo-fo.
i am deep like Boksburg lake.
November 16, 2007 - 09:43 — Flutter
Deksel
kwatmeisterrr drrrreams of me?
like Boksburg lakes deep frrrreee wild
frrrreeee speech Flutterrrrrrrrr.......
November 16, 2007 - 08:41 — Dusty Muffin
Dex
Ag man Dex you knowYou make me fall off my chairI can like to laugh
November 16, 2007 - 10:17 — Dolce
Schmex
My rrrrs rolls perfectwhen I'm wearing a jean pantand a high heel shoe.
November 16, 2007 - 08:22 — kachasu
sounds like shit to me
so, i will hang out on my forums for haiku friday.
you lot are such poetry snobs.
*mutter*
November 16, 2007 - 11:13 — Flutter
KC
i see you watchingfrom fringes. Me thinks you have uch to offer this end
November 16, 2007 - 08:24 — dex
Ah.
i see it was a moooo-sli morning, Pixie.
November 16, 2007 - 08:26 — kachasu
i am groovy dex
just so long as i don't picked on for lack of haiku.
November 16, 2007 - 08:31 — dex
ag KC
who will pick on you?you've been spoken of the world over;mountains tremble in fear.
November 16, 2007 - 11:16 — Flutter
Dexie
tis true ja, KC strikes
fear into the most warring heart
cowering like lambs
November 16, 2007 - 08:38 — Dusty Muffin
KC - Haiku 101
You just write three lines with syllables in each, of three, five and then three.
You will need fingersto make sure you do it right.There! Done and dusted.
November 16, 2007 - 08:51 — kachasu
i don't care!
bloody haiku nazi flutter is.
November 16, 2007 - 09:37 — Flutter
Excellent KC...
single image haiku brilliant Thatch
November 16, 2007 - 08:46 — dex
dusty
its 5-7-5 isn't it?
November 16, 2007 - 09:34 — Dusty Muffin
Dex
you are a smartie
and today you win the prize.
What’s your wish, Master?
November 16, 2007 - 09:40 — dex
Dusts
simple man, I am
-feet in a cold, clean river
is all that i want.
November 16, 2007 - 10:12 — Flutter
Yeh...
Mmhh.. rainbow rivers
colour mundane days with
fresh splashes of light
November 15, 2007 - 22:05 — dex
err
not so very sure
i am, of whether i have
what is needed here.
November 15, 2007 - 22:23 — Flutter
...
why Dex, you haiku
winter croaks broken chainsaw
men have poor rythym
November 15, 2007 - 22:53 — Arbchick
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr DEX
just grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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